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welcome back!

I'm going to make an unsolicited suggestion for improvement in editing even tho clearly you're a better writer than me.

After your first-pass at editing, can you do one more round but this time just try to add sub-headings? The H2, H3 etc. Actually H2 is good enough. A couple of H2 would be great for me as a reader.

Thank you 🙏

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